this doesn't really strike me as 'album quality.'
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---blue
2004-09-27 13:59:45 |
The only way you could've pulled this off as a decent song is if you didn't take any breaths while singing it. ...But no.
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---E r i c
2004-09-27 17:32:43 |
punk rock drinking songs need choruses
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---E r i k
2004-10-04 22:33:34 |
yeah, this could have been your best song, but you left out the chorus, as erik said. you should work on your songwriting more.
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---frankie
2004-10-05 20:22:59 |
i'm not 100% sure i agree that it needs choruses but it needs *something*. it stops briefly several times and goes back into the same thing that was just happening. if only once it would go into something that sounded different, it would really add a tremendous amount to the song.
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---tviyh
2004-10-13 23:38:48 |
What tviyh said. At some points a drumroll comes and then... the same thing. Doesn't deserve a bad rating though.
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---Tuuur
2008-01-09 13:12:03 |
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